ENTRY NUMBER 6
From: Robert Jackson
email: seraphyn303@googlemail.com
SuperRealGraphics.com is putting out an open call for pin-up submissions to be included in the upcoming third issue of Super Real, and this is where you can see the entrants!
5 Comments:
My comments:
I like how this one makes use of a digital pic background, like the book often does (and it seems like NYC too, where the character is from).
i would definatley appreciate a little critique.. i don't usually draw women so any help would be good.
Rob,
I like how you kept her long and lean, like the actual character (a model), but she is actually still curvy (or a bit top heavy at least) in the book. Now I don't want to suggest that all depictions of her should be excessive, but perhaps a little more developed chest. 8)
Also, with the anatomy, it seems like her arms are perhaps a bit too short. Not by much, but the hands should come to about mid-thigh when her arms are draped straight like that. (Funny note: I seem to have the opposite problem with arms, often making them too long! :p)
Thanks,
Jason
For some reason, in the small thumbnail-pic, I thought she looked a bit like Sarah Jessica Parker.
I love this one!
Finally, a "Super Real" contest entry that looks "super real[istic]" that is, like a real beautiful woman, not just another comic book stereotypical bimbo.
Very well done, Mr. Jackson. Bravo.
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